Your Story My PenLogo Design Contest

Hi Peg. This is stronger, thanks!

Hi, The bright colors represent the colorful stories people tell you. I have changed the fonts to make it very easy to read. Looking forward to further feedback..thanks so much.. Peg

Hi Peg. I like this design and the composition, but it feels a bit retro and feminine. What could you do to make it more bold? I'm wondering if you changed the font for 'My Pen' if that would do the trick. Thanks.

Hi, Looking forward to your feedback...thanks so much.. Peg