Your Story My PenLogo Design Contest

Thanks FishDesigns! I like your original better and feel the client might struggle with these innovative borders

Hi there. I think this is really innovative but have a difficult time reading it. Can you try one thing? If you put a purple border around this entire design, it might pull it together and make it more easily readable. Thanks.

Sweet. I'd love to see it under all 3 new versions?

Oh, OK. I will add the tagline.

Please see my second note on your original of this design :)

Also, it should have a narrow horizontal box underneath with my slogan in smaller font: Live it, dream it, immortalize it. (Or however you see fit to include the slogan.)

Stunning! Elegant, modern, literary, clever. I'm trying to decide how to get a bit more color in or around it, and a border around it. (Like if it were square with a purple metallic border? Don't know if that would kill it or make it pop.) I'm open to suggestions as you're the artist!