I still like your first entry better. We really like both your's and the other we have at the top. I don't really know what changes I am looking for in your's. I do like the black writing, but I am wondering if we can get the black, green, and red all into the "Ur 1st" logo portion. I very much like how you are giving "Ur 1st" kinda it's own thing, along with getting the point across of what our company is. But we do love your entries!!!