#10 Its organic and concise. I like the lettering. Could the tree be more abstract? What about brightening the colors a bit although not to lose the earthy feel. Bring a stronger turquoise and we are not sure about the color of Loft - Maybe more burnt red, ?? Can the roots grow into the words or is that too complex? Can the tree have a little more life? Reach? What if it had leaves? probably too busy but might be nice to see. What about making the tree more like the one we sent. it looks like a brain...or lungs. We like that. BTW we do have copyright to that image. I misunderstood the question.
We don't want you to lose interest - we keep coming back to this design - we think we like your font the best of all - it is just a little erie - reminds us of Halloween little - we know we gave you the tree image to go off of and you did that. Just lighten it up in the branches so it is not so ghostly- but keep the organic part of the tree trunk - we like that. Can you make the tree trunk a little less obvious that it is a trunk and give it a little bit of a yoga pose but not so obvious as what was done with some of the other entries. Like we don't want a circle for a head in the yoga pose . Remember turquoise could be stronger and we like golds. We like the espresso color you used for the trunk and yoga. Try changing the Loft to turqoise!!!!! we like your style.
Look at entry 59 - Change the font back to your entry 10 - we like the font of Loft but we don;t like the font of Yoga, - the font of Loft feels "lofty" - the Y in yoga is hard to read. So stay with 59 and change the Yoga word to the dark brown after you change the font. Using this 59 add in some green leaves and dark red (burnt red ) instead of the fuscia. good work! THanks for listening. I can understand how you want to take a day off - we are glad to see you back.
I think I confused the rank # with the entry #, but you got it!!! We really like it. #117 really stands out to us. Can you substitute 'burnt red' for the pink/fuscia?
#116 please give this burnt red instead of pink like you did to #117. Is there something you can do to the "Y" to make it more contemporary and more obviously a "Y"
Getting down to the wire. I have asked for an extension for a couple small changes between you and another contestant. The change you made to the "y" is great. Can you make the "a" in "yoga" more readable? Give the words a little more space? Perhaps see what it looks like with a more contemporary font altogether....