I like the use of the person as part of the tree, but it is too obvious. "yoga loft" font is a bit corporate for us. How can it be more organic? There is too much "movement" going to the left. What about making the tree trunk espresso in color and give it some roots that ground it under the logo? Can you make the leaves more spiritual? The branches/leaves need to be more vertical, open and reachy.
We like the two tones in the words. Make 'yoga' turquoise and 'loft' espresso.
Lose the head on the figure..no circle.
Click on the link below. Can you give the figure person that kind of shape where the arms reach into the branches and the leg merges as roots that grow to the right to support the name "yoga loft?"
We Like #33 the best. Can you incorporate some dark brown/espresso color into for a grounded feel? Take a look at the logo on the site below. I would love to see something from you with the influence of the logo for this company:
yes...#44. Its good. The leaves need to be more random and less dense as they go up. See entry #11. Notice how the leaves fade into nothing as they expand. Make "loft" turquoise and bring turquoise and gold into the leaves. Would love to see a version with the roots of the tree widening under the words.