I really like where this is going. I wonder how it would look if it was simplified a bit. I am not sure how I feel about the sharp flat edges on each arc. I wonder how it would look if they taper a bit. Not sure if that makes sense or not, but the shape of one of those feather like arcs instead of looking like a wedge shape more like a pointy feather shape..
Hi, thanks for your comment and feedback :) The design has been simplified for your review: I think #52 is very clean and simple, whereas #53 portray more dynamism..
I think overall these ideas need simplified even more. Less elements, less delicate (thin) lines. A little more empty space between the elements. Getting better but not quite there.