Here you have a few options to consider. Please see the Camino browser logo. I see some designs getting close maybe too close to the famous browser logoo.
I think the "Incorporated" is too prominent on the logo. This could be added on letter head and I think the logo would look better without the "Incorporated"
Thanks for your feedback. I have submitted 8 different designs and it would be interested to see some rankings before i update the "Inc." so that i can focus on specific entries which your client likes.
Only first ranked designer can upload new revisions. You can change the rankings at any time. During the wrap up period there are possible tweaks and adjustments above the chosen logo.