I have reranked this one after talking internally. Perhaps try some other script, I like how the text on the bottom balances out the double text above.
Could we try a version that includes the location Kakaʻako tied with the estd. 2018 text. Perhaps Coffee & Cocktails above, Then ESTD. 2018 Kakaʻako below as a single line or stacked text. Make sure the "apostrophe" in the location is actually a Hawaiian ʻOkina. (the direction of the apostrophe is different)
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