Woodland LoftsLogo Design Contest

Change direction, is it work?

If there is heads up about what you did not like from my design, font, or shape of the building, please let me know. And will make another alternative. Thank You

Thank You for the rank Sir. And here I update the logo. Is it work?

Hello dear Client, Hope You have a great result from Your Contest. Please allow me to introduce my self, I am Titus from SevenNine Graphics Studio. I was around here about 15++ years, and have a great pleasure to be part of this great atmosphere Logo Crowdsource site.

Here is I submit my design. Is my design make sense and on the right track? feedback are very welcome to me to improve the design, and ofcourse will very happy to make improvement. Thank You

Best Regard "Titus"