We like both of your entrants a lot! On #24, perhaps try it in other colors, particularly green. On #25, how about trying a little bolder color (darker grey, perhaps black). You're definitely on to something and I hope you'll keep playing around with a couple of additional submissions!
thanks for your feedback, please see my new entry for color variantion at entry #54 #55 #56 #57 #58 #59 #60 #61 #62 #63 #64 #65 #66 #67 #68 #69 #70 #71 #72 feel free for other needs
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