Great start! but those mountains are too ski like and are not representative of the Santa Ynez Mountain Range or San Rafael. Please refer to the links of previous logos I already have. Thank you for these. They are great start!!
cool. Maybe try with a few different color options please and even just a grayscale one too. Also try one without the sun rays and one with different sun ray option. Thank you!
#29 with normal sun image sets on the mountain, I think this is the right position of the sun to sync the white part of the mountain as its light reflection?
#31 with distress effect , Hope that you like it :)
#33 with another sun ray option also with distress effect .
Each of them has greyscale option.
I hope that you like the revisions I made. If you want changes, please let me know. God bless!
Hi! yes saw the compass. I've always tried to incorporate one but doesn't seem to work? I like the new distressed look and the suns of 33,34. Can you try one with Santa Barbara County instead of the "Discover, Adventure, Expierence" and one with miniature compasses separating Discover * Adventure * Experience" Maybe that would be too small?
Please check #45 with little compasses separating "Discover, Adventure, Experience" #46 with compass in the "o" of the "TOURS" #47 with greyscale option #48 with "Santa Barbara County" I also added frame with thin black line in the graphics. I hope that you like my revisions. If you want changes, please do not hesitate to ask. God bless!
Please check #54 #55 and #56 . I think this one is not busy ? What do you think. If you want any changes please let me know . The compass is really great look for me too . I am glad you like it. God bless!
56 is so so nice. Love it. Is there any way to soften the vines. Also can you try a black and gold. Not orange. And an orange and grey! Thank you so much!
Thanks a lot for your feedback. Please check #58 , #59 , #60 , #61 , #62 , #63 , with soften vines. The version #58 and #59 with black and gold combination , and #60 and #63 with orange and grey . Hope that you like them. God bless!
In my own humble opinion, I think the rough lines image of vines is good. Maybe I just need to reduce its rough or soften a little? What do you think? Also I try to find new concept before your contest ends. I hope it will work. God bless!
Yes, I agree. The rough lines represent the vines, but just seem a tiny bit too big or rough. I really like these though, and thank you for trying a new concept. I would love to see some new ideas
Please check #65 with smoother lines in the vines. I hope that you like it. Also #66 and #67 with other option. the only problem about this concept is I have no idea where to incorporate the vine line graphics. Is the image you are provided is really needed in the logo?
HI! No Maybe that was a big mistake to incorporate those images in order to see completely fresh ideas. I just thought to put them up as a point of reference. What do you think about making the picture smaller and the company name bigger? I still really like 56 could you they that without the compass and put Santa Barbara County instead of the Slogan. Cheers! Thanks for all your help. this is amazing
I think its just enough rough, but for me I still like the more rough vine? just my own thoughts . But I can suggest you to please refer it to your friends so that the their majority suggestions can help if you don't mind? God bless!
Please check #77 with smaller image, and bigger company name. I think this one is better. Also I remove the compass in the "O" . Also I replace the tagline into Santa Barbara County. If there is missing , please let me know. God bless !
Yes! 77 is great. I like the tag line better this looks very nice :). Now can you put the colors of #45 in the latest format with the distressed and box with 77's format of Letter size and tagline and art size??? Awesome stuff!
The orange and grey combo looks good too on #60 What do you think. I love #77 Design. The only I just nervous was. Do at all think it looks like snow capped mountains? Please let me know what you think. I really love the new design
Please check #86 and #87. Honestly , its looking great now. I like the balance of the #77 , so maybe we will stick to it size of the image and size of company name? we will just try to make some tweaks with the image? What do you think? Thanks a lot for liking my revisions!
Yes! The size is and everything is looking so killer. I just was getting a feeling of snow capped mountains, which is weird because I never did before.. I just don't want a snow capped feel or an island feel.That's why I asked for the orange and grey combo but I don't like the Orange vines. 87 is really nice. I get the artistic, organic yet dynamic feel !!!
For 77 what if the sunlight part of the mountains were the grey like the sun in it? Also for the new. #87. Can you try the "tours" in the brown too. Cheers!
Here they are. Please check #90 with grey-orange combinations but change the vines into orange, #91 which the color of the part of the mountain change to grey as what you like to see and #92 with brown color in the "tours" . Hope that you like them :). If there is missing , please let me know . God bless!
Hi!! I don't see the brown "Tours" in 92?? 90 looks black and orange not grey?? Can you make the mountain and the vines of #90 into the Light grey you have in #91 of the vines. Thank you and God Bless!
Sorry for the brown color. Please check #93 with brown color of "TOURS" Hope that this is the exact brown? Also #94 with dark grey mountain and light grey vines, #95 with light grey mountains and vines but the orange shade in the mountain doesn't work with light grey so I change it into white. Lastly #96 with light grey mountains and vines ,but yellow- orange color of the sun and mountain part. Hope that you like them. God bless you too!
Hi ! Thank you for these. I like how the mouton and the vines are same color! How come the orange shading does not work with the light grey? We are so close! just want to bring it home! I would like your professional opinion please. For branding is better to use just two colors or is multiple colors fine with this type of logo. What is your favorite? I just want it clean, elegant and with an edge. Ok so #91 can you put in a distressed sky and the half distressed box and one more with just a half box and one with a sky with full box. Sorry for all this. It's just so close.
This logo will go on my website, print materials, collateral ( wine glasses, water bottles, key chains, etc...), mobile device, T-Shirts, Vehicle etc..... When we finish do I get a few different logos ( meaning color options and border options) or is it just one logo that I get at the end? What is your professional opinion? Thanks Arttaurus for all your work!
What if you did a black sun and black shading on 95? Maybe try that. I was hoping the light grey/orange was going to work somehow!! Cheers my friend.. so close
Thank you very much for the feedback. I am working on it now. I love to hear that you like my works. After the contest , yes! you can get all the colors you want , not a problem.
In my own opinion, 3 colors will be the maximum for this kind of design. Two colors is much better. grey and orange, black and grey, ad dark brown and grey is my favorite color . They look very elegant to me .
Please check , #98 with added the distress sky and the half box, #99 with the sky alone and #100 with the distress half box alone. I hope that this is the direction you like to see. #101 with a light grey- orange combination, I think this looks better . I was wrong , I use dark orange/almost red so that I can say not looking good, but this one is looking good for me. #102 is with light grey with black sun and shade of mountain, its looking good too. Finally , if you like a 3 color combination, please check #103 with orange sun, black mountain and green vines. looking good too. For me this is all good color combination at the moment. Its up to you which color you are prefer. Looking forward for your feedback :) . God bless you my friend!
94 is what I am thinking for now. :) So, I can't find that one logo where you softened the lines a bit. How about just those three middle lines, that it, I like how the other ones look. Just take a little bit of the "jagged" feel of those three middle vines.. When you look at this your eye is drawn to it too much to it. Wow I'm so excited!!