Wild River NetworksLogo Design Contest

update river effect more prominent

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Jefry

I like line at the base of the mountain. I see a bit of texture now in the water, I wonder if that could be more pronounced?

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Thanks for feedback, update proposal make layout more proportional and balance #107 also in flat design for mountain and wild river networks #106 & #108

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Jefry

I like how the river meets the moutains

I think two lines might be better for the text?

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Thanks for feedback, how about this #89 and #90

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Jefry

What about a line horizontally between wild river and networks? Maybe too much? Dunno.

Not sure about individual plants, I wonder if there's some more generic foliage elements?

Is it possible to have the river lead all the way to the mountains, or better to have white space? I like the gradient on the mountains. I wonder if there's a slightly different font?

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Thanks for feedback, add water texture #85 and add some grass #86, let me know your thoughts.

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Jefry

I think I like the mountains here a little better than the other example, more negative space airs it out a bit. Same comment about extending the river out and changing its texture perhaps.

I like the mountains fading and the basic river path, is it possible to extend the river to the mountain base, and maybe add some texture so the river doesn't look as much like a blue road?

I like the mountains, I wonder if the river could have more stark elements in it suggesting water, sort of like the mountains have those riblet things suggesting little canyons and snow?

Is it possible to make the river lead down into the text? I want to keep the leaves the same as the sister logo to show continuity

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Thanks for feedback, update proposal add mountain and river #51 and #52, let me know your thoughts.

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Jefry

I like the slightly darker blue in Wild River, might be nice to incorporate some more elements in the design like mountains/river or?

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I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, don't hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful

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Jefry