Fine. Thanks. Still the "H" is not clear enough. You can recordnize it only very hard. The synergie with the "!" is fine but is not sooo important. More importend is a well recordnized "H". Maybe you got 1-2 idea´s to go this way?
#22 looks cool. #20 could although be a possibility but could you check the "H" please in the same letter style as the "W" and the "Y"? Don´t worry about the rating. I´m still thinking about. ;-)