This is interesting too, but if you reduced the size of White Pass to make it maybe 50-60% of the size of Village Inn, and make Village Inn a bit smaller, remove slogan, then you could expand entire graphic to be bigger in proportion to text blocks.
We like the four peaks with windows. Not there yet on the font. Remove the slogan. Try a font that is maybe a bit not as blocky or heavy looking, but still simple to read and legible.
wendygurl, thanks so much! This is interesting. We have an idea. What if you killed the three horizontal "stair" lines and instead put little windows in each of the 4 peaks, maybe slight larger in the larger peaks? That makes it look like a series of buildings (which we are) and mountains. The word Inn right now is too small, and we want to get rid of the slogan. It too busy for a logo. Could your rearrange the lines of the graphic so that Inn was incorporated into the main text line, have the final downward slope descend into one of the sloped lines in an N. I realize this becomes more horizontal but maybe a font that is taller rather than wider would help bring it all into a more square presentation?
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Kindly review #66 and #70 if they fonts are in the right direction. Thank you!
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Hope you meant like #62.
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