We like this better! Can you try this with the words Village Inn bigger, or White Pass smaller, or both? And switch out the green for a bright sky/aquamarine blue and swap trees for something that connotes a small alpine lake or water feature (we have a lake) or stream or something...
Donadell: thanks for offering to work with us. Sorry so late with feedback, it is Labor Day weekend, bad timing, we should have planned better. Your design is among our favorites, but a general reaction is that it is too "busy" and ways you could try to simplify include making the mountain concept more plain, trees more plain. The words for Village Inn need to be larger and more legible. We'd love to see a version where Village Inn is also in the same script font, just for curiosity. Thanks again for working on this. WPVI
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