Thanks for your design. It's interesting. I am looking for something more masculine. Maybe try a different type of bird like a hawk or eagle. Also try and make them less bird-like (if that makes sense). Also I'd love to see some different font options.
I like where you're going with #29. Try making the shape of the bird more compact and more angular. I'd prefer a more simplistic design, something that could be a bird, but doesn't necessarily look like one if that makes sense?
Thanks for the feedback, it's always great to here from the Contest Holders. I've submitted a few concepts that play with the silhouette of a soaring bird, but trying not to make it to obvious and also trying to make the image resemble an abstract W.