This is fantastic. Can you angle the orange line in the W to be a bit more to the right - we know it will cover part of the E but that's ok. Would be interesting to see it with a lower arch. Also, for balance, the dolphin may have to land closer to the right edge of the E.
Can we see a version where the swoosh comes out of the W instead of the N and have the dolphin facing the other way? The dolphin looks great by the way! The dog too!
Can you try to move the check mark to the W instead? The current check mark is backwards and we'd like to see it in the W facing the other direction - even if it covers part of the E.
Just to see what it would look like, can you make the orange swoosh in the "N" look like a check mark by coloring the right vertical line of the N also in orange?
This looks pretty good. We just need to fix the shape of the dolphin head and make the tail a bit bigger. It gets too skinny before the tail. Can you make the dog's collar solid blue?
Remove the orange dots behind the dolphins. Dolphin's tail fluke needs to be a bit bigger. Dolphin's face is a bit too pointy. For the dog, we would like to remove the spots, and then add a line for his leg/chest.
The human looks like he's being attacked by the dolphin. Perhaps move the human to the right side? Also, maybe make the human shape more kid-like and not look like he's running?
I like the color combos of this one or #4 the best. I love the underlining of expert. I like the creative placing of the dog. I love the dolphin (nice job on getting it anatomically correct). I'm not a fan of the hoop jump. I'd consider removing the man holding the hoop and the hoop and separating the other man from the dolphin so it doesn't look like they are connected. I do like the positioning of that man as it looks celebratory in a way. Love the swoosh going through the N.
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