Your concept with the sun is interesting. I wonder if you might have an idea with a brighter sun, and or possibly a leaf or plant, using yellow and greens.
The sun and water rays I am not too sure about(in that position anyway) but whatever I am easy. Maybe a little more solid font.
Actually, i have to laugh, i meant that to be a stylized dandelion wish. (Guess that didn't work too well.) I'll try some other postings tomorrow if I have time. It's getting late here right now.
Thanks for the feedback. Feedback, no matter what is always good to have.