Can you render a logo where the word "Wear" is on top, the word "your" is on the top downward portion of the fish, and the word "Witness" is underneath the tag and extends all the way to the end of the fish. Beneath the word witness you can put the slogan
Also, just so I can see it with my eyes, could you try a simpler t-shirt icon as well, maybe not as generic as the first one you sent but something between
Could you try some different color combinations. I like the way you have "Your", "live", "share", and "wear", all the same color so keep that pattern and just try some other color combinations.
Can you put the word "your" over the curved part of the fish. It will have to be smaller. I don't know if this will work or not but want to see it . Thanks. Please change the words in the slogan "live", "share" and "Wear" to orange color. I like that effect. Thanks
Okay, We are getting somewhere I think. Here are some things I am realizing. 1. The logos where the word "your" is by itself (ex. 82-84) just don't seem to really work (except for #63 but I don't really like that one because it looks too sporty. I'm not trying to convey sportswear so much as just clothing). The word "your" needs to be paired with "Wear" or "Witness" for it to flow right.
2. I like the shirt in #81 except the sleeves almost look like ears on a dog, so still not the best shirt. The double-shirt in 86 is nice. If you use a single shirt then I like that style.
3. Due to constraints on space the slogan for all new versions will need to be in this format Live • Share • WEAR the Gospel or LIVE • SHARE • WEAR THE GOSPEL. I Like where you have "the Gospel" in grayscale and underlined like in #44.
4. Lastly, several people have commented that the black and orange just don't work. I am a big fan of gray and orange so if you could render the top choices in gray and orange for me to see that would be great. Also offer up some other color combinations. Not really happy with the red, white, blue, black combo.... Maybe its just the black. Maybe it contrasts too much.
I like the green but don't like the grayscale so please make black again. The only thing I like in grayscale is the words "the Gospel" in the slogan. Please put the stripe beneath "Gospel" like you have it in #44.
I'm thinking... does the tag have to be a two-tone colored tag? Could it be all white and the shirt colored, or the other way around? What about the tag as a fading color between say, green and white or orange and white... or even green and black and orange and black (or grey)
Oh, and please do this one with the same shirt as in #110
Would you be willing to put a man's t-shirt and woman's together in the tag. Maybe they could both be white or two different colors... play around with it. Thanksl
#125 what if you make the woman's shirt Green with a thin white outline where it meets the black and make the man's shirt white. But overlay the man's shirt on top of the woman's, so the opposite of what it is now.
Sorry ebonk, i've been away from my computer. What if you take #125 and make the whole tag green and keep the shirts the way they are. Make the fish golden with a glimmer (a burst or something). Make the underline of the gospel the same color as the fish.
We're getting there... Can you make the orange a bit more brilliant? ... like a blaze orange. Also, I like the darker shade of green so try using that for the whole tag and all the green lettering.
#109 Can you render this one with the blaze orange fish (maybe a cross between the gold and the orange but bright and brilliant). Also, try several variations as follows: 1. make "wear" same color as fish 2. make "wear" same color as fish with no underline under "Gospel" 2. make "wear the Gospel" same color as fish and underline "wear the Gospel" with green underline
lastly if you have a woman's shirt that is similar style to this men's shirt, you can try putting the two on the same tag.
We're getting close ebonk... I like #148 the best but when I went to move it into the ranked column something happened and it disappeared. Can you reload it on your end? because it's no longer showing up in the list.
I just randomly ran across this website: http://doxabranding.com/logo-design/ See how the logos look polished? What can we do to polish this one? Notice the shading of the gold colors in the first two logos. Maybe even adding a thin black line around the fish to make it stand out better. See what you think.
Hello, I don't like the black background color... I see what you mean.. It looks sharp but I'm not going to have a black background.
On #150 could you put a very thin black line around the fish and the tag? Make "wear the gospel" a solid color... a blend the best shows the color of the fish.
#151... I really like this. What does this look like with white background? I can also tell you for sure I like the mens/woman's t-shirts in this one so all future logos will have these shirts. I also like "wear the Gospel" to be all the same color like this one with the green stripe underneath. We are almost there ebonk!! :-)