Number 1 right now! We like this a lot. Can you make the font slightly smaller and lower it so it's not touching the wave? Also, please change the silhouette to white.
Could you please re post the link of the image you were referring to ? The link currently says
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Sorry for the delay. We are liking this one a lot, but some want to see more energy, and movement. We are not sure how to direct you to do that exactly. If you have ideas that still fit this look, please put them in.
Something we found that has a lot of this energy/motion is this; http://www.hawaiistar.com/2011/04/u-half-marathon/ . Obviously it's a different shape, but just using it as an example of feel. That said, while we like the circle logo you've done, don't feel constrained to it.
FYI : More depth to the design will consume more colors to increase details. Multiple shades of the same color need to be used to make the design sharp.
We are still looking at this one as well.
Can you try changing the stars to sunfish silhouettes?
Do you have other ideas to bring in that cool texture of #46 but keeping the family in there and using oaks rather than pines?
I know you are working with my comment about using fewer colors, and I appreciate that, but I'm curious if we could have a little more of that depth without going overboard on different colors. Thank you!
Thank you for all of your ideas you submitted! This one is our favorite so far, though some would like to see a different font that doesn't have the curls.
Also, for the main dark blue, can you try 003C71 *or* 041C2C, and for the green, 55951B?
Can you also do some of the same edits I mentioned for the other similar design (no pines, yes people, yes oak tree, lighter colors. I don't want to lose the feel of your artwork though!
Hi!
A few edits some would like to see:
1. Remove most or all of the evergreen trees and put a different silhouette in such as people (families) playing, running, jumping, whatever. An oak tree would be a more accurate tree for the area this takes place.
2. Some didn't like the green tones in the sky background. Can you echo the blue tones from the bottom on the top half of the design? I'm open to other colors too, but need to watch the number of colors used for printing purposes.
Hi sreekantg,
This is a strong start and we like the color and land-to-water-to-plant elements, but not sure it captures the core elements and energy we want. I looked at some of your other designs and really like your style! Can we try something more in the shape and feel of your Urlaubsding, or even Surf Unlimited or Orange Beach? I love the colors of the Orange Beach logo. Emphasis we want is on community, family, togetherness, nature, joy, water.
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thank you! I think we're almost there.
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http://www.hawaiistar.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/kau-family-fun-fest.jpg
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Could you please re post the link of the image you were referring to ? The link currently says
"The page you are looking for could not be found.". Thanks
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Sorry for the delay. We are liking this one a lot, but some want to see more energy, and movement. We are not sure how to direct you to do that exactly. If you have ideas that still fit this look, please put them in.
Something we found that has a lot of this energy/motion is this; http://www.hawaiistar.com/2011/04/u-half-marathon/ . Obviously it's a different shape, but just using it as an example of feel. That said, while we like the circle logo you've done, don't feel constrained to it.
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Can you try changing the stars to sunfish silhouettes?
Do you have other ideas to bring in that cool texture of #46 but keeping the family in there and using oaks rather than pines?
I know you are working with my comment about using fewer colors, and I appreciate that, but I'm curious if we could have a little more of that depth without going overboard on different colors. Thank you!
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Also, for the main dark blue, can you try 003C71 *or* 041C2C, and for the green, 55951B?
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A few edits some would like to see:
1. Remove most or all of the evergreen trees and put a different silhouette in such as people (families) playing, running, jumping, whatever. An oak tree would be a more accurate tree for the area this takes place.
2. Some didn't like the green tones in the sky background. Can you echo the blue tones from the bottom on the top half of the design? I'm open to other colors too, but need to watch the number of colors used for printing purposes.
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This is a strong start and we like the color and land-to-water-to-plant elements, but not sure it captures the core elements and energy we want. I looked at some of your other designs and really like your style! Can we try something more in the shape and feel of your Urlaubsding, or even Surf Unlimited or Orange Beach? I love the colors of the Orange Beach logo. Emphasis we want is on community, family, togetherness, nature, joy, water.
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Feedback on any of the designs would help me design a better logo, according to your choice.
Thank you
Sreekant