Sorry for the confusion about asking for something "softer". Rather than softer coloring, I was thinking to try a softer brush, less hard edges on the letters.
It is getting there and I personally like it, but I'm still not feeling the seriousness and confidence that we need the logo to convey (because of the charity and government organizations that we'll be working with). I'm not sure what to suggest at this point. Maybe changing some of the coloring. Maybe making the droplet a little skinnier. I'll keep thinking about it and let you know if I come up with anything else to try.
I like where this is headed, but this isn't it. Let's try this...Take the water drop out of the W/N. Make the water drop surround the W/N and make the body of the water drop smaller than the circle that you have now. I'd like to see two versions of the W/N, one like you have it now and then one with softer edges and a little more subtle.
OK, the drop looks much better now, but I'm sorry to say that these new ones all look very generic. I'm not sure where to tell you to go with this, but I'd ideally like to have something unique or clever in the graphic that would at least set us apart from other water companies. Thanks for the submission though!
Hi! Thanks again for the logo. I'm trying to keep the design flat. This one looks too 3-D and this water droplet is making me feel fat. Keep trying though!
Thanks very much for trying to get orange in there! I'm not feeling any of the logos with the hands though. It makes it feel too religious. Trying to stay away from potential controversy!
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Regards
Dennis
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