I really like the circle in orange iwth the white figure outlined in blue. I'd get rid of the W and keep it a little more simple. I also tend to really like strong and powerful over flowy. Most of the designs are really curvy and bendy as opposed to more angular. I'm going for strong, fast, powerful, movement. Please do another partial silhouette that's more masculine. Nice work, Thanks, Larry
Thanks for your appreciation. I'll try my best to revise my design based on your suggestions. But I can't do it right now because I'm still in my office. I will work on it a soon as possible when I arrive at home.
Here is my improvement (#66) for my previous entry #23, based on your suggestions. Silhouette of the runner symbolized by strong straight lines, make it more masculine. Hopefully pleased...
Positive, I like that a lot. Could I see more variations? Maybe brush strokes? I like the lines. I think that the strong triangular theme is throwing me. Definitely onto something. Great Work! thanks, Larry
Positive. I really like this design. I don't see the initials although I don't really need them. I am interested to see where they are. Could you do some more variations keeping all of the figure inside the circle. I would love to see more angular, maybe brush strokes and also it would be interested to see the figure coming toward the viewer. Thanks for the great work! This is my new favorite! Larry
The W is very subtle, as hands at the middle, more obvious at entry #84. The F is both as hands and legs. The A is as legs. I will try to make the imagery based on your last feedback.
PT, I see the WFA now! Thanks. I really like the cleaner silhouette you did originally although the stylized new designs are cool. If you could try to get either an abstract runner or a real silhouette coming at the viewer in full stride, that would be cool. The guys you have coming at us now are joggers. I would stick to one runner although I didn't know that before. Thanks for all the different looks! Larry
PT. That's the right thought. I like the angles. I think the runner looks a little like a robot. could you do that in a guy who is really sprinting but with a rougher brush stroke or more abstract /irregular style? Not as squeaky clean. Thanks! Larry
PT. I would love to see some more versions of the #83 design. I do feel as though the figure looks a little like a chinese character. I like the white on the colors. Different perspectives with the abstract figure and different abstracts would be great. Think outside the box. Thanks, Larry
PT. I LOVE 131! I really like the perspective. Could you keep that perspective and make variations that look less like the symbol for Pi? I would love to see something that looks a little edgier and sketched. Maybe a little more artsy as if it was done with natural media? Really cool stuff!! Thanks, Larry
PT. Sorry, put the kids to bed. You're right! That's what I meant by natural media. Like a paint brush with paint. Great work! Could you please try some different figures. I think it would be great if the front leg didn't curl back under. I think i would like it if the background was a circle without a bump and do you know what I mean about the symbol Pi? The mathematical symbol for 3.14... is ∏. I really like the brush strokes. Thanks! Larry
Okey Mr./Mrs. Larrry, Maybe midnight in US now ?! Actually, I'm also waiting for the birth of my 3rd son, have entered the day to birth. Take a rest if you have to. I'll always try my best.
PT, You're having a baby today?!! Congratulations!! Do you want to take a couple of days off?! Please enjoy this time and let me know when you want to do some more designs. Thanks for all the hard work! Larry
Thanks. Maybe this one (#133) is my last submission for today. But please don't be hesitate to ask me more if you still have more suggestions. In the next couple hours I will bring my wife to hospital. Have a nice dream.
PT, I hope your day went well. #133 is my favorite. I would love to see variations with that same feel, brush stroke. Just different shapes to the runner. Great Work! thanks, Larry
#157 : A little tweak for #133, make it more stronger and seems like reaching out the finish line. #158 and #159 : Brush stroke for #101. #160 : I think this font is match enough with the character. But of course this can be changed if you don't like it.
PT, I'm not sure which is my favorite now. 157 or 133. I really like them both. You did an amazing job of recreating that lunge for the finish line. I am really happy with your work and would love to see other variation on that theme. Maybe a bigger stride? I'm not really interested in the more robotic looking figure. Maybe get creative with the flawy brush stroke guy. If you have your new son and want to take time with the family, let me know as we have a couple of days. I won't end the competition without checking with you. Great work! Thanks, Larry
First of all, thanks a lot for your understanding about my condition. Until now my baby still not born yet, the doctor said possibly 2 more days, it will be a thrilling day. But you don't have to worry too much, I always try my best to serve you. For now I have had 3 more designs to submit.
#165 : I try to visualize a soccer player. #166 : Maybe you like this concept ?! #167 : Tweaked a bit from #157, bigger stride. My fellow designers really love this one, they said "strong, simple, dynamic, etc." I really hope you like it...
Thank you for giving me a chance to submit these proposals, Pt
PT, I really love 165. I can't have a soccer player as it's too specific. Stick to the runners as it's more universal 166 is not that artsy feel I love so much. I would love to see you get creative and artsy with the runner concept. Thanks! Larry
I'm back. My baby has born. It's a boy. I currently do not have any designs to be uploaded, but I'm ready to work with you. I saw so many runner figures you have from another designers, but seems that you don't like them at all. Could you give me more specific about the figure you want ?!
PT, I would love to see a figure coming at the angle you've been drawing. Having an even more artsy brush stroke and a little more abstract would be cool. I really like it when it looks like the runner has both feet off the ground and is really running fast. Get creative with the runner. I don't need any medical crosses and the WFA is less important than having a cool image. Thanks! Larry
Here is what I can do right now (#220). More flowy than earlier. I hope this one is what you are waiting for. But if it's not, basically, I'll always ready to work with you, even if your contest ended.