I think somewhere between #35 & 36 is what I'm looking for.
#35 Love it and see business card. Like emphasis on names. Can you add ".com" Our website domain is WardField.com #36 Love it and see the yard sign. Can you incorporate Black and ".com" Italicize "moving"
#106,107,108...Give me some space between Ward and Field. Also, make ".com" vertical at end of Ward Field.
You picked up a design element bringing Ward Field together. Good catch! While I like that it pulls together and adds distance to visibility of Brand...we are in Dallas, TX. No mountains here. What else can you do?
Like cleaner lines of house.
Love your work. Not to throw you off but I want your best creativity. If you think your designs would look even better in different colors than we chose, please present them. Think Real Estate & yard sign visibility.
I will be ranking you with some suggestions. I've thrown contest out to friends & colleagues and while their choices are varied, you are the only designer that ALL have picked at least one of your logos.
Here are the final things I'd like to see. Clarity of parties via: Separation of names with some space...Ward Field also, Different colors for names...Ward Field
"Group" if present...smaller and left in logo as our domain is "WardField.com" ".com" also de-emphasized. I like it either below Name line or at the end vertical. Want our website known but we aren't a .com company. If that makes sense.
If you haven't already submitted a version with a black background, please do so.
Last, it has become clear we need to add.."Realtors, A Real Estate Group, Professional Realtors" or something that identifies us as Realtors, not a moving company :)