Hi Josh,
It is great to see your designs. Thank you very much.
Your garlic is authentic and natural looking, the hand drawn aspect gives it an endearing quality.
In my mind the horizontal dashes create a sort of wicker basket effect which detracts from the overall garlic picture. The wrappers do help create interest.
The font is easy to read. I feel the font used for "Walton" is good but not quite sophisticated enough.
Overall your color schemes work well but I would like to see more vibrancy, however, that can be hard when there is a big block of color as in your design.
Thank you, Josh. Your designs have a great natural, homestead, down to earth vibe. Great work.
All the best.