Hi Business Builders,
Thank you for the updated design.
Firstly, I notice the colors are brighter and more eye catching. I would like to see you go crazy with the colors and really push the design into a healthy combination between rustic and web 2.0. See if you can get the logo to leap off the page and grab and hold a viewers attention.
The font is improved. Garlic is now easy to read. I feel the font could be improved at the moment it is a bit too everyday, commonplace.
Hope this helps, Business Builders. I am really looking forward to see what you come up with.
Thanks again. All the best.