The intertwined shapes are engaging. The Maple Leaf represents Canada, which is good. Both designs are too red at the moment. Move towards orange. Font is too generic at the moment. More stylised.
Maybe try the words BC Canada underneath Walton Garlic. Introduce more color - dark, vibrant orange, chocolate brown, tan light brown, white, reddish highlights. Also try a garlic symbol in place of the maple leaf. See what it looks like.
I really like the emblem with banner. Having BC Canada is good. I love the sunrays. I prefer the gradient, colour to white, effect on sunrays rather than solid sunrays or gradient, colour to black/dark. I found the text "Walton Garlic" quite hard to read when the shadowing was added. Yes, I find the intertwining shapes engaging, however, I slightly worry that by itself it might not convey "garlic". What do you think? Can you try a more realistic garlic picture and see if it looks good? Also try the maple leaf with a smaller garlic picture in front similar to #13.
I am liking your latest submission. Taking away the sunrays actually looks good as well. It helps simplify the overall design. Interesting. The red background might be too red. Can orange work as a background? "Walton Garlic" is easy to read and the font is good. I am still hoping to see a realistic garlic icon.
Thank you for the more realistic garlic. It looks fantastic. The colors are engaging. Can you try replacing the intertwined garlic symbol with a single, white garlic icon. Keep the maple leaf and gradient colors.
I would love to see a variety of font and color variations. Perhaps a little less red. Also, a single garlic bulb if possible. Thanks, Artoz. I have been really enjoying your designs.
#51 Great design, Artoz. Each design gets better and better. I feel this design has the most POP. It engages the viewer and is very easy to look at. I prefer the dark brown border that you have used. The text "Walton Garlic" is easy to read but it probably needs a little more character and flair. I wonder if some orange with red highlight sunrays would really enhance the design. Overall the design is really good and I like it a lot. Thanks again, Artoz for another fantastic submission. All the best,
Dear CH, thank you for the feedback. You appreciate all designers' work a lot.. :) Well, I just submitted the changes and I was trying to submit the shield version.. I hope you'll like that one.. :)
Impressive! Artoz, these designs are just getting better and better. The shield is awesome. I just love it. The maple leaf works really well, too. The sunrays are fantastic. Overall, I feel it is a bit too red. It would be good if some of the red could be taken over by orange. Looks good, Artoz. All the best.
A couple of points to consider - the garlic color needs to be changed. The pale yellow color is not quite working. White usually works best for garlic because it depicts health and purity. Yellow depicts old age and disease. I am thinking that the font on #31 is probably the best font. It has a nice sense of elegance. Stick with the circular emblem, I really liked the shield but in the end I have to go with the oval shape. One last point, Artoz. It would be good if you included a version that used purple, orange and white with possible yellow or red highlights. Purple is a color that naturally occurs in garlic and our preference for purple in the design has increased. All the best, Artoz. Your work and efforts are greatly appreciated. Thank you.