Update proposal, I can't update my proposal like 2nd rank, because placement and layout can be protected. And I really respect other designer concepts. Sorry for this situations.
On equestion, the idea of script font from the chef? or after the chef look other designers proposal, the chef be interesting in script font? Because I must respect other designers proposal.
Wait still in progress, I am always have time in my country now is in the morning. Sorry for late reply because your previous feedback received 03.00AM.
The chef/owner loves this one. However can we try a small change? On the bowl can we try to incorporate a very slight Hawaiian design? She is Hawaiian and would love that almost hidden touch. I'll send you a link to what I was thinking. Maybe it could be in place of the decorative line?
Could you try a few designs working in the gondola? The chef/owner likes this direction too. Could you try a few ways of in incorporating the words with the gondola?
It would be great to make the gold even lighter. I like the shadow in gold. Can you place the bowl to the left of the words and increase the size of the text.
Also could you try an Art Deco style font? Like the 1920's.
1. Take out the house, it can be subtle like a field.
2. I like the bowl.
3. Can you get rid of the shine/gradient color?
4. Pasta Factory needs to be larger than Walla Walla.
5. Can you place the bowl to the side? There is a long horizontal sign on the building where the logo will go.
6. Can you give a light gold line shadow behind white text?
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Thank you for considering my design proposals. Really appreciate.
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How about this.... Est. 2019 inside the bowl
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Update proposal, I can't update my proposal like 2nd rank, because placement and layout can be protected. And I really respect other designer concepts. Sorry for this situations.
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Update with another variation of script font
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #249 #250 and #251, let me know your thoughts.
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Update proposal #217 and #216, let me know your thoughts.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal with hawaiian pattern in bowl #215 and #216, what do you think?
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Update with meatballs and revision on plate
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Update proposal #151
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Update all stack together
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Update proposal #70 and #71
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The Nice Guys
Moonstruck
Casa Blanca
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal Pasta inside the bowl in gold #68 and in black #69.
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Update with more short bowl #65, let me know your thoughts.
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Shadow more prominent #64
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Update proposal without a gap
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Thanks for feedback, Update proposal still with gondola with better shape.
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Update with gondola
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But I don't get the point of "a gondola peaking out the side? A hint of Venice."
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Could you do this one with a gondola peaking out the side? A hint of Venice.
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Update base on entry number #34, with pasta more out from the bowl
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Update without shadow
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Update with Muara Font
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Update with moura nouva font and make pasta more out
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal more bright #39 and #40
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Update with moustra nouva font, in progress with 1920 font
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Also could you try an Art Deco style font? Like the 1920's.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #31 #30 and #29, let me know your thoughts.
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2. I like the bowl.
3. Can you get rid of the shine/gradient color?
4. Pasta Factory needs to be larger than Walla Walla.
5. Can you place the bowl to the side? There is a long horizontal sign on the building where the logo will go.
6. Can you give a light gold line shadow behind white text?
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I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, don't hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful
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