Entry #9 feels too boxy to me. You make it clean, yes, but it wouldn't make me want to come in and shop there. Entry #8 is much better in that the boxes are separated and the "2" stands out better. I feel that the tag line should be as long as the word consignments. The colors need adjusting. I need some brightness as well as classic design. I know it is a challenge, but that is what I would like.