Walk on Water Fishing GuideLogo Design Contest

I modified the fish according to your directions ( I guess that you meant dorsal fin - not dorsal gill). If something is still wrong you can use drawing feature. It lets you to draw over the logo entry to show me the spots that need attention.

That's what you call an expert advice! Now I see direction. I'm working on it. Should be ready soon.

The head needs to be sloped down more and less rounded. The mouth is also too wide and needs to be smaller. Also the dorsal Gill needs to be more connected.

I'm only allowed to give my contact data after the contest. Maybe try to write what's wrong with the fish. It's close to midnight here but I can correct it tomorrow morning.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/c7pu5gkecbi0emh/img_9502.jpg?dl=0

https://www.dropbox.com/s/9z7b96jr8qdgmyb/img_0538.jpg?dl=0

Maybe this will help

May I have your phone number to call you and describe the fish?

I reworked whole fish staying within the same color dynamics. Please let me know if it feels more like a crappie now.

To be true I did use real photos to draw my crappie but I will try to make corrections.

Example 2: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ok0rpha4y3l2lk6/shutterstock_107781899.jpg?dl=0

https://www.dropbox.com/s/p0qi15ikygxv4p4/screenshot_20210513-143618_chrome.jpg?dl=0

Lure looks good, but the fish needs to look more like a crappie. If you can do that, we will select you as the winner

I updated the lure. Please let me know if size is right.

No problem. I will draw it as soon as I get back home in the evening.

Can you keep the colors buy change the lure to a crappie jig? See example: https://www.dropbox.com/s/7gvs1wwh96qmqw0/642769265.jpg?dl=0

Make this look like a Texas crappie

https://www.dropbox.com/s/7gicyi0bn47g4ue/screenshot_20210513-143618_chrome.jpg?dl=0