I would remove the slogan at the bottom and just have the business name. Make the tail wag. Face the pup forward with a huge smile. Have the pup hold a ball in her mouth. Dot the "i's" with small bones. More detail to the pup perhaps with a few spots on her. Use the entire color pallette: Maui blue, orange, light green and chocolate brown. Try a different font that looks less robotic. I really like the overall design of the pup. She's not too cutesie which I like.
I like that the dog is smiling! That is very appealing. The dog looks happy. The lettering needs to be a bit more crisp and clean. :) I would like to see more color.
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