I really love your designs. I just think they are a little too complex. I especially love the design that I have in 3rd place. Could you experiment with having the logo on the left side of the lettering and also submitting a design that is a little bit more basic but with the same creative style that you have? You really are an incredible designer! Thanks for submitting these! You definitely have the potential of taking the top spot.
My family and I really like this design, but it still is missing just a little something. I can't quite pinpoint what it is. Definitely, keep submitting some updated ideas. Thanks so much!