I like the first design. I think if you went back and tried to make the rose not as clunky and more refined, it would be better. I think you should think how little do I need to show the rose to make the idea still recognizable. The thickness of the rose pedals is too much also. Im not loving the typeface either. I think a typeface thats much more simpler would work.
I like it better but I still think you can get more simplistic. For example, the eye doesn't have to be a full circle to know that's an eye. Does that make sense?