VisibilityLogo Design Contest

Hi Peter, thanks for the 1st rank. Here's another proposal. I added a connection line between the dots to represent supply chain. Let me know what you think. If you'd like any changes, please feel free to ask.

Thanks!

Best,
Ryo

I also added a color at the negative space arrow between letter t and y to make it more standout.

Felt that iit is too busy with the graphic along the top

Could you do the colour of the wording innthe same colour as Entry 11

Thks
Peter

Thanks for the feedback, peter. Here's the updates

Thanks for the rank, Peter. Is there anything else I can do for you? Just feel free to ask and I'll do my best for you.

Thanks!

Ryo

Hi Peter. Just want to remind you that during the judging mode, only the 1st ranked designer who can still submit revision. So if you need any changes, I can still submit revisions for you. Please do not hesitate to ask.

Thanks