#30 and #31 I would like to see in a blue, but before this, I would like to remove the dot above the i. Also, mabye a faint washed out city slyline to represent Vegas in side the VIP. Just an idea. My business partner says the V look a little fat. I am not too sure I agree. Something else you might be able to play with.
We like the idea; however, a couple of things need adjusted. 1. The VIP should line up with the edge of the Golf on the left side. 2. The path the ball is on looks like a slice, which in golf is bad.
Next, play with the coloring a little. Also, maybe try to add a little to it. We like the simplicity, but would like to what we could add to it. Maybe some rocks, or faint hotel skyline. Get creative, and I am sure you will do well.