We really like where you have been going with this. Adding the border #19 sets it off well. Any chance you could try to work with the image to the left of the name and see how that looks? Other ideas are perhaps dropping the baseline for the V and final D of Vineyard below the line of the other letters. That may add interest to the type. You can look at our logo at CatholicFamilyGifts.com to see what we are trying to suggest with the letters.