good start. i feel the lips and the smirk need to be a bit raunchier and raw, more of a deeper, darker red ( i think). the over all look of the lips as well as the text should be dirty, grungy but still legible, almost comic book illustration. deeper "cartoonish" looking of graphic illustration looking, as if it came out of a graphic novel or comic book. Hope that makes any kind of sense.
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thanks for you feedback, let me know if you need a change.
regards,
ndaru
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