Vindictive Lust, Inc.Logo Design Contest

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Tongue piercing! Very cool. I really like these lips - the type needs to be played with some more. and I think with this it would look cool maybe going either around it, top or bottom not sure but I see it like that in my head.

I like the idea of the full ring piercing, that's very sexy. Not in love with this type though.

Type is great and I really like the placement. Piercing needs to be moved over to the right ever so slightly to be centered. The tribal design in the background is neat, it adds a certain flavor to it - my only concern is that tribal (tattoos) were very 1990's and not so popular now. But now you put the idea in my head that maybe some kind of backdrop would work.....Lips are perfect other than the placement of the piercing. Love the tongue.

I LOVE this, lips are great - I think adding the tongue was the right idea. The piercing needs to be moved ever so slightly over to the right to be dead center. The type is SICK, but i'm worried if it's hard to read? I'm going to get feedback from a few friends. Definitely digging this one big time.

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jekson

I really dig this, remove the bottom ball on the piercing. And, if you would - I knoW i ORIGINALLY said no tongue but I'm starting to rethink that.

I like the VL and in the back but the L seems SO much larger than the V.

I love the lips, they're perfect. The piercing can just be the top silver ball. Let's try to remove the bottom ball. And I like the color of the type, just not sure about the actual type. I like the classy look but this particular one just isn't doing it for me.

Hi, thanks for the feedback. I submit new revision, i hope you like it, thanks again

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jekson

I really love the lips you drew, I think that's a great start. Only thing I would maybe add/tweak, is putting more definition in the lips (as in, lines like real lips). The addition of the piercing is great, but preferable on the bottom lip, where it doesn't stick out randomly from the top. As far as the type goes, I like it because it's simple yet seductive and goes well with the image. Definitely prefer the placement of the name on the bottom underneath the lips as in #9. I like the placement of the type of #6, but the ,inc on a separate line doesn't work. In that case it should be all one line. Perhaps consider wrapping "Vindictive Lust, Inc" around the top/bottom of the lips?

Hi, Welcome to logotournament, here I send my concept for your consideration , i hope you

like it

Please feel free to contact me if you need any further revision,

thank you

jekson