Victory Bible CollegeLogo Design Contest

Yeah its still not quite right. I guess we will go with just the circle and rework the bridge ourselves since we are out of time.

in this, the lines are a bit thinner

Or could try this dropbox link https://www.dropbox.com/s/bd7z52xh2eakfpe/bible%20school.jpg?dl=0

I've given you access now. You should be able to access it

Cant access the link, it asks for permision. It is a sketch with bold lines,
I ll try a thiner one

Bridge incorporated in the last 2 entries, the position of the circle on upper left is like sun, for me it looks like sunrise. Let me know how you see the new concept.

Hart

I was hoping for thinner lines, more sketch and within the circle. I have a sample idea. https://drive.google.com/a/myvictory.ca/file/d/0B353aiFxhvt9ZkQzTGVaQUJLRWM/view?usp=sharing Its not the same bridge so you'd have to tweak a bit but this is kind of what we are looking for. Can you sketch?

ok, lets see what can we have through this process, first of all I am sending 4 revised entries with the circle at the side, to have the image of this new layout of the logo, secondly I am working on the new element (the bridge) and will upload them asap

Alright, we have spent days going back and forth on this and so far nothing is quite right. Can we try something different with this logo? Can we remove the slogan, Put the circle on the Left like an icon. Add a very thin line to separate the 'icon' and the words. Create
VICTORY
BIBLE
COLLEGE

to offset the icon a bit away from the line. So o | text to give a really rough imagery lol

Doing that mean the circle has no relevance anymore. We are hoping to maybe try adding something to the circle like a hand drawn bridge to give a similar feel to the circle. Something artist and sketchy. The bridge we have in Lethbridge is this http://www.lethbridge.ca/Things-To-Do/About-Lethbridge/PublishingImages/101027-_MG_4005.jpg or http://www.gettyimages.ca/detail/photo/famous-trestle-bridge-in-lethbridge-alberta-royalty-free-image/157484216?esource=SEO_GIS_CDN_Redirect to give you an idea.

also, the orange side is rotated to the 10 o clock mark tried to balance with the green side

slogan colored with the dark blue

slogan colored with the dark blue

this is a darker green slogan

Maybe shift the orange to the 10oclock mark to counter balance the green at the 7 mark? And can you color the slogan with that dark blue?

Green needs to be stronger in the slogan for readability. Maybe the dark blue (and the whole slogan)

Say my greetings to the abstract director :) Definitely I consider orange color as a warm so I added it and think it matches the rest, also changed the text into green as requested.

regards,
Hart

Nice. I like this version because of the artist splash and the color really helps with the energy. (And one of the directors is an abstract artist so you are getting bonus points with him haha). Another thought he had (and we can wait until phase 2 if you want) is a) try the growing leaders in the green text, and b) without changing text adding a another splash of color but a warm color to the circle. Thanks so much

I added green color as a third to pop it out and made the painted lines larger to get close to the aesthetic of the first dynamic circle. Any requests are welcome provided that I am receiving during the day time (UTC greek time zone).

(Not sure how much tweaking you are supposed to be doing at this as this is our first time using logotournament. If we are supposed to wait for the next phase so you aren't 'wasting' time on a project yet I totally get it. At this point you are in the top 5 anyway.

Can you add a third color to the circle? They like having the slogan in there but it loses the dynamic energy of the first with the large bolder college text.

Thank you for the positive feedback, I tried to incoporate the slogan in different ways, in a circular orbit #20 and in one line #21. Let me know about how you see the updates.

regards,
Hart

Like the artistic feel of the circle and the variations of the colors within. Love that it is not stereotypical religious symbols.

Missing the slogan. I personally like the simplicity of this, but our director would like to see if there is a way to incorporate the slogan.