Vibe TribeLogo Design Contest

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Hi sir,
Thanks for the ranking, do you have any more ideas to improve this design ?!

Please take the time to review this design.
Best,

I'd love to know what you think of this design and how can i improve it more !

This version is more bright and colorful !
and Please rank my designs amongst the 5 first so i can be able to submit more concepts in the next round !
Best regards,

Hey!
I see that you labeled this design as "Prefers Others".
Can you please explain the reason why and what modifications can i make it to the finalists phase ?!
Regards,

I'll submit a new proposition considering your recommendations !

Alright sir !

I also like how there isn't much grey in the pupil compared to your other version. Is there a way to make the gray look like hammered metal? So that it looks like silver rather than grey?

I like how this one doesn't have a lot of grey. Can you make a triangle in the background with geometric details? Also I need the colors to be much brighter. So that it looks refreshing, crisp, clean since I am marketing a bottled water. It's a beautiful design. Can you also remove the eye lid? Thanks

Your art is very cool. Can you make the triangle into a geometric pattern and so that there is more white space than grey? I want this to convey a refreshing drink. Also, can you remove the eye lid? It makes the eye look sad rather than enlightened. Also use a brighter color blue for the shading. I want this design to be eye catching.

Please take the time to review my designs #25 #26 and #27
Best,

Looking forward to your feedback and please precise my position in your contest
Thank you :))

Initial concept, any feedback is welcome !