Vet On The RunLogo Design Contest

I know from beginning, because too many feedback, and request revision, but didn't raise my rank. LOL

THANKS SO MUCH for all your hard work. I have decided I am unlikely to go with this design and I don’t want to waste any more of your time. Best wishes!

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Thanks for feedback, update with O and T capital

I like the colors! Can you do this with “On The” O and T capitalized? And can you add a third color at the bottom like where the orange was on #130? Thanks

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Update proposal with vibrant color

great!

all in purple

Can you put "on the" back to the purple so all writing is one color? thanks for all you efforts.

thank you

Update proposals #120 #121 #122 #123 #124 #125 #126 #127 #128 and #129 all with different cursive fonts

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Jefry

I don't like the color block... from far away it looks like a hyphen. I also like a different, curvy font.

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How about this?

change to regular font?

much better! can you change the font for "on the"?

How about this?

maybe darken the turquoise a bit too, please. (from a distance you kind of lose the detail of her profile with this lighter color)

Can you change the pink to orange? and can you change the "on the" to a font that is a bit more legible from a distance? I still want the font to be curvy like this but just less so.

Hi Aburkhart,

Thanks for feedback, how about this #111 and #112, let me know your thoughts.

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Jefry

I thought I had responded to this one but I guess not. It's still in the running but I want to see what it looks like in other colors. From a slight distance I think it just looks all pink and purple; too feminine.

How about this?

so it is definitely more legible but too close (if not the same) as the rest of the font. I there a more "curvy" but still legible font you could try?

Hi Aburkhart,

Thanks for feedback, update proposal #60, let me know your thoughts.

Regards,
Jefry

This is much better! I'm worried the cursive font will be a bit hard to read on my car magnet, maybe choose something a bit more legible from a distance? thanks!!

Hi Aburkhart,

Thanks for feedback, update proposal change the "on" same size with "the". And change the font, I try to change font with cursive font, let me know your thoughts,

Regards,
Jefry

can you make the dog look like it's going a bit slower, like a trot instead of a sprint?

ok great, now make "the" same size as "on" and change the font of just those two words. thank you!

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Thanks for feedback, update with bigger dog #24 and #25, also update with on smaller and all in single color #28, let me know your thoughts.

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Jefry

I don’t like the dog. It looks like a puppy which I wouldn’t run with. Maybe a larger dog that looks like it’s running in a more relaxed way. Also I like the bigger ponytail like in the other one. Thanks!

I wou;d still like the writing to be updated. I want the “on the” part to be smaller and all one color.

I like the bigger ponytail, please update the other design with that. Thanks

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Update proposal with more thicker pony tails #21 and add dog running behind #22, let me know your thoughts.

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Jefry

I like the addition of the orange here, these colors are nice together to offset the femininity of the all pink and purple designs. Could you add a leash and a dog trailing just behind her? please keep her arms bent as they are.

This one is nice. maybe a color change though, this is too feminine. Also, please see other comments on font. Great work!

I'd still like to see some change in the font here.

Can you make the ponytail slightly longer and thicker? Like this one of the dog and cat much better!

I think "the" should also be small to match "on". I do like the "breeze" design better.

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Update proposal on in lowercase

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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #17 #16 and #15, let me know your thoughts.

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Jefry

I would like to see some different font/smaller size for the "on the" part of the name.

Hello, same feeling about the "breeze" in this one; looks a bit like snakes. Also, I feel the dog/cat will be too small on a business card. This is a nice design though.

I like the black in this one. However I'm not keen on the "breeze" around her, it reminds me of snakes.

Hi! Thanks so much for your submissions and hard work. I can see that you really paid attention to my comments. That said, seeing the colors together, I think I need to amend my original comment. I think the pink and purple are too close in color and the sihlouette of the runner may get lost on quick glance. Maybe making the silhouette a different color than the background, maybe black? I'm not sure to be honest. Also, I think the name should all appear in the same color. I like the dog/cat in the house, but I'm worried they will be too small to see on a business card. Please feel free to use other colors, such as the ones in the pictures I submitted. Thanks again!

Greetings...

I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, don't hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful

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Jefry