Ventura Braves Baseball ClubLogo Design Contest

Revision
remove the motion effect from the baseball and coloring the tomahawk base on your brief (HEX COLOR: CE1141, 13274F, EAAA00 )
am I in right direction?

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please check on entry #54

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The coloring looks a little better. It’d still like to see a little more cartoon link coloring on the tomahawk.

Can you please remove the motion effect from the baseball?

Revision.
a red handle
any other suggestion?

B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

done...
you can check on entry #53

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Can you keep this coloring with a red handle?

cartoon version.
more dynamic and more bolder.

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also please check another version on entry #51

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color change and give more detail on tomahawk.

thanks.
you can check your request on entry #50

B 1st gd, mbahdjoyo

Thank you. I moved it back up.

Thanks...for your feedback.
Just for your information my friend, we're on selection phase and on selection phase only 1st rank can submit revision, if you still interested to my design you should raise up my rank to the 1st place, I really sorry about it, it's Logo tournament rules...raise up my rank to the 1st place and I will help you get what you need..

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Coloring, would like to change the coloring of the handle from red to yellow and the bindings from yellow to red.

Looking for more shading and detail on the handle and the stone of the tomahawk. Looking for a more cartoon coloring/design of the hatchet.

I'd like some revisions to the coloring of the hatchet but i'm having difficulties explaining what I'd like for it look like. Is there a way I can upload or send a sample picture?

revision.
tilt the ball to make it more look chooping and more standout as a baseball ball.
what do you thing?

B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

I made little bit adjustment on tomahawk and ball on entry #34
please take a look.

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Is there something that can i do to get exactly what are you looking for? Or you want something busy logo, not simple to applying in different promotion material?

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revision
slightly move the baseball up and to the right Similar to #24 .
any other suggestion?

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please check on entry #29

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Yes, the additional contrast colors look great.
Can you please slightly move the baseball up and to the right of Ventura so we can see more of the baseball. Similar to #24.

am I in right direction?

B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

please check my revision on entry #26

B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

I think we're on the right track. There are just a couple of small changes I'd like to make.

1. lower cursive font size of "braves" slightly. Possibly a couple of points...

2. Refer to logo #4. I like the scale of the tomahawk including how its chopping the ball and the amount of contrasting white, red and grey.

Version #24 compressed the swoosh, contrasting colors and baseball placement which resulted in the appears being more compressed.

I placed some drawings on this to point out areas that differ between the tomahawk on #4 and this current version.

Can we use the exact tomahawk, ball and swoosh from #4 to this version as well as decreasing the Braves font ever so slightly.

revision
cursive font with slash for baseball club.
make baseball ball little bit standout.
any other suggestion?

B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

please check on entry #24

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for sash and cursive reference, look at dodgers baseball logo.

Slightly rotate tomahawk and baseball to where you can see the complete baseball.

I'd prefer to have the "braves" in a cursive font. The S will have a sash with the baseball club in it.

revision
ribbon with baseball club text on letter S.
what do you thing?
any other suggestion?

B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

thanks for your feedback
I made revision on entry #21
please check it out.

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Thank you. Can you make the font size a little smaller and with the braves add a trailing ribbon after the "S" and relocate the "baseball club" within the ribbon?

alternative layout.
more bold and more dynamic.
what do you thing? any suggestion?

B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

I made another option on entry #11
please check it out.

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Hi jsharp517
any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.

B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo