Not good, I don't like the bird representation and the color mixing. I am looking for something simpler. Previous versions were better, eg #75. Let me know if you have new ideas for the same topic and I'll get you in top 5.
I am interested in a goshawk bird, that is the most related to our brand.
I like your line but please try to avoid a feminine feel, these colors are too girly, like some brand for women only. Our main audience is men.
I like the colors and the font but what is this shape, a butterfly? I definitely want to have a (hidden) meaning in the figure.
Maybe you could try some bird motive?
Thank you.
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I like your line but please try to avoid a feminine feel, these colors are too girly, like some brand for women only. Our main audience is men.
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Maybe you could try some bird motive?
Thank you.