VanderersLogo Design Contest

Hello,
here are some revisions with the V more defined + color palettes.
Let me know what you think.
Thank you
elena K.

Also I am interested in a more colorful variant. Could you please try to play with colors? Thanks

Could you somehow emphasize the V formed wings? It is not obvious enough. Maybe cutting some part from the left side.

I understand and thank you for removing it. Here is a submission where the bird's wings form a V. I will try come up with more.
Thank you
Elena K.

I deleted the bird part from the brief, I was not aware of terms, sorry for that.

As for the logo I don't like the new version. The first bird is still the best but not enough. Do you have other ideas for the same motive? How could we get a bird symbolizing modernity, futurism, playing, imgaination?

Dear contest holder, please read the rules here:
What is required of LogoTournament clients:
We require that you do not ask one Designer to use elements or concepts from another Designer. The general rule is that, if a Designer was the first to submit the idea, they essentially own that concept or idea for the remainder of the contest. Requests or ideas you already have put in your contest Brief are fair game and open to everyone. Comments and requests that you post later that are your own original ideas are acceptable for Designers to use. Concepts that are considered obvious will also be fair game, for example: a dog & cat for a pet hospital, shopping bag for an e-commerce company, a tooth for a dentist, initials for a lawyer, etc.

The bird was my idea and should not be added in the brief.
Thank you
Elena K.

I don't like either of the revisions. They all have a sad feeling, I don' want to see the bird closed. It should be free and the logo should look happy.
Could you please try to show the bird from the front? Maybe a bird in a headset, sunglasses?:) I have no concrete idea, feel free to suggest new entries based on the free bird motive. Thank you.

I am glad you like it. The bird has no limits in travelling anywhere exactly like fantasy. That was the connection. Here are some revisions.
Let me know what you think.
Thank you
Elena K.

I like it. How did you come up with this idea? Is it a goshawk?
Do you have other ideas for the bird representation? How could you make it more related to our activity? (involving playing, future, VR headest, maybe a cube)