VamureLogo Design Contest

#45 - I like how you have pulled letters into each other. not sure about the triangle on the 'm' as i think it's makes it a little playful. If you could keep these letters moving into each other as you have done but in a font that is more sheek and fresh, like #46 I think it could be really strong.

#46 - This logo is really in the right direction and feel for where I need it. Well designed. I like the way you have brought the U and R together.

I hope you have another go using what I said in #45. Will be interested to see your result.

Thanks

#46 - If possible could you do me a favor on this design. Could you switch the colours around so a dark grey wording on a while background. Also if possible could you give the colouring a slightly darker tone then the background and maybe put some sort of effect into the colour like some of the other designers to help it jump off the page a bit. The concept of how you have designed this is great!

Cheers for the feedback! Here are some more submissions based on your requests. Hopefully I've understood correctly.
Let me know if any queries.
Thanks,
Craig

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Hi Craig,

Thanks for doing this so quickly.

What you have done with #51 and #52 is great. Just what I was after from your design.

#53 and #54 - Text layout is very similar to #51 and #52 but a little more blocky. Much rather what you did with #51 and #52.

Thanks

Another couple of styles to consider...

(This comment references Entry #66)

Hi Craig,

I'm thinking strongly about having the slogan "fashion online" in my logo. Could you please apply this to your #51 design so I can see how you would adapt this into your design.

Thanks

Hi Geoff, I've submitted a few variations with the slogan. I've kept it very simple as I'm guessing you don't want it to detract from the main name.
Cheers,
Craig

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#265 - I think the way you have highlighted 'ur' and put it in the title is really great! My only concern with your design is that people are saying the logo reminds them of vampire. I think this because it is quite sharp and harsh. If you have the time to create something that jumps off the page like this one but not as hard it would be amazing!

I hope you can put it together in time.

Thanks

No probs at all...will look into it and submit some variations in the next few hours.
Cheers for the feedback.
Craig

Hi Geoffrey, I have submitted a few edited versions for you with a focus on it being a bit 'softer'. I'm liking the use of the lowercase mixed with the uppercase as it gives it an extra edge plus helps keep the lines a bit smoother and less harsh. Plus I thought the lighter grey looks perhaps a little more 'fashionable'.
Let me know if you have any queries.
I'll be online for the next few hours.
Cheers,
Craig

(This comment references Entry #339)

Ps. Glad u like the highlight of the 'ur' and addition of 'your'. Thought it added a personal touch so people feel it's their own online store.