I like #14 even more, although the placement of the globe-like object is a little off. What if it replaced the "o" of vacation? Also the spacing of "Rental" is a little too wide. I know that's the challenge, visually balancing two words that have different lengths. This is getting closer. Another option would be to use the compass type object in #11 but have a globe inside rather than a palm tree, and place it after "rental" to balance out a rectangular shape.