I like the type face you used in the lettering. I also like the format of #35. I love the design, but I do not know if it describes the service offered at the salon. If the swirls and lines represent hair, I am concerned it looks a little unruly. It is definitely modern and hip. I could see putting it on a t-shirt. I really do not know how to make it better, without taking away from your style. I love the colors you used though. I like how you incorporated the blue (At least the middle swirly looks blue. It might be black?) Oh well. You are very talented.
Cristie