Unity SportsLogo Design Contest

Hello, I have given a new and revised proposals as you requested.
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redarmy

Swap to IndonesianFull screen close:) Thank you , I will do a revision again according to your request , if I have to change the sign of lightning s letter ? Because I think lightning is a symbol of energy , and if I need to change , will change it .
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Red Army

we like that this concept offers a mark on the left. Some people mentioned it looks a little like a super hero logo. Would it be possible to chance the mark to something without the fading colors and lightning bolt style s? We are also interested in seeing the UNITY spaced a bit differently. Like the typeface, but the i and the t bleed together and make it look more like unoy than unity.

:) Thank you for the ratings you have given and I will revise it as good as possible. Thank you very much for your kindness.

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Redarmy

Really like this logo. I think it's better without the "running" guy in the middle because it kind of makes it look like we offer strictly track camps and not a variety of sports camps. I'm also wondering if you could disconnect the letters I and T at the bottom in "Unity" because it almost looks like it could be an O.