I like the added detail to it, but the outside black ring I think would look better with a solid black. I know that there is a little bit of more detail that could be added to this, I'm just not sure. When I see this design it reminds me of a badge or crest, those items usually have many details and strong sense of symbolism in them. I know that is difficult to capture, but that is a little bit more of what I mean.
Symbolism with what our company represents, a heat transfer graphics company, based on athletic wear, our product can handle all types of pulling, stretching and abuse. It has longevity and can be applied to any textile. Some kind of symbolism capturing that would really complete the design. Thank you so much for all your efforts rem-brand.