Hi Mr. Smith,
So far you've done the best job of communicating our concept (connecting individual Christians across the globe). However, I think the quality of your graphics could be improved. They're pretty one-dimensional and I feel like the people holding hands around the globe are kind of cheezy. I also would like a more classy, sophisticated font, similar to entry #2. (Or one that's more interesting like #7.)
I'd also be interested to see what you can come up with by incorporating the concept of technology.
Many thanks!