Remove "feel" . change the sakura. make it a watermark. make it look more real. make umami bento larger. change the japanese hiragana to look more authentic. (like a brush stroke). other than that, it looks good.
thank you for your comment and the directions you are providing. Here are some revisions and variations #102 #103 #104 #105 #106 #107 #108 I am at your disposal